Star shine

Star Shine is my brother. Our family rely on him very much. He is a great brother and I am writing this for him.

There was a silly boy named Star Shine.

And you will never hear him whine.

But he can be mad sometime

You don't want to give him a hard time.

Because he always want to shine. 

Author's Note

What do you think of the dialogue. Help me with what I can work on and tell me what I did good on.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Hopeful and kind words in the poetry. I liked how you made the boy 'Shine' have life and spirit. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Fairy]

Thank you. I am glad you enjoy.

[Coyote Poetry]

I did enjoy and you are welcome.