Based on the contents this was a very well written poem, with a very good meaning. I, personally, love to see people incorporating God into the idea of love and lasting relationships...accepting that he is the power overall that brings us together, who creates us, as human beings, for the purpose of loving and being loved, and that our 'lasting relationships' are predstined and blessed by him. I suppose the verse that had the most impact for me was:
'God made us for each other to laugh and cry,
to accept, advise or give it,
he'll be by our side, teaching us day by day how
to live it.'
This verse, to me, was very important, and gave the entire poem meaning. Without this verse I feel that the meaning would have been lost somewhere. Anyways, it was very well written and had a great concept.
i have been writing poetry since i was 13 and can't imagine my like w/ out writing of some kind. i have some poetry published on the website poetry.com but and seriously interested in puttung it all .. more..