hidden faces

Hiding ones true self. Sadly I find it to be a bit selfish and dark but I liked how it turned out.

I hide myself behind the shadows of another face
Behind this pale white mask with empty dull eyes
Only to never show my true self
As they wander in my darkness
Thinking they see what hides behind the mask
but most never truely know me
They see what I want them to see.

Author's Note

I think its ok but needs a bit of editing still..

Reviews

[Simon Welsh]

That's a good stanza! Just feels like it needs expanding.