Within the depth of my engulfing
emotions, an intense dawn broke through an obscure night. A joyous tide rose
above the untidy shores to carry the wreckage away. An everlasting contentment
topped all disillusionment. Bright smiles enlightened time. Now, these devoured
sensations and mood are also said to be momentary. As if it is only a matter of
time before it becomes subtle. But I agree to disagree.
A bend in the road does not
necessarily cease the path. A closed door does not burn down destination. A
stumbling block does not slay a traveler. We all have learned to keep on
moving. That is what has brought us this far; to this very moment as I write
and as you read. Even with lost treasures, aching bruises, and rough paths we
have made it to the boulevard of happiness.
Hard to believe? Take a moment to
close your eyes. Relive a blissful moment in time. I promise you a smile.
Beautiful ... the imagery and emotion in this piece is outstanding : )
I especially enjoyed the message and analogies you used in the second paragraph because of how simple and true they are. The descriptions flowed so easily and naturally. I swear I smiled after reading this.
An evocative write ... thanks for sharing.
Beautiful ... the imagery and emotion in this piece is outstanding : )
I especially enjoyed the message and analogies you used in the second paragraph because of how simple and true they are. The descriptions flowed so easily and naturally. I swear I smiled after reading this.
An evocative write ... thanks for sharing.
I got your smile.
I like the positive intent in this wonderful and very descriptive post.
No matter what hardships we face we have to move on and make the best of the situation at hand.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Indeed, we need to make the best out the life which has been gifted to us.
Thank you.. read moreIndeed, we need to make the best out the life which has been gifted to us.
Let me begin in saying that the first paragraph of this is nothing short of stellar. You placed your words greatly and from that bore an awesome image of sadness being broken down by a joyous serenity.
This work brough to memory a conversation that I had with a great friend recently. As humans, we're almost hardwired into tunnel vision when it comes to our pitfalls, but it rarely works in reverse when we're in good spirits. A piece like this goes the distance in reminding someone out there that there is always light at the end of every tunnel; that there is always sunrise chasing away the unwanted nights of our days.
Beautiful, Fahmida -- more like exceptional.
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7 Years Ago
I am happy that my words could serve its purpose. Much thank you for your encouragement.
What a lifting, beautiful write! Through darkness you see the dawn approaching, and nothing can stop the light. And your words at the end, this hopeful blessing, it gives everyone the wish they need to carry on and to find joy in this very moment. Wondrous!
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Thank you for your gentle appreciation. Positive energy makes the journey of life a little easier. W.. read moreThank you for your gentle appreciation. Positive energy makes the journey of life a little easier. We should never let go of it.
Wow, a thoughtful story, Fahmida.
Yes, just a bad day or a bad phase of a life doesn't mean we would stop living or stop moving forward.
Irrespective of what happens, we should keep moving and that's what is important.
Love the ending note. It makes me want to believe that all is really well if end is well. And I wish everyone could really be happy thinking of those last memories.
A very nice write :-)
Thanks for sharing
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Thank you, Gorthi! I am much delighted that you can totally read my thoughts. What you perceived is .. read moreThank you, Gorthi! I am much delighted that you can totally read my thoughts. What you perceived is exactly what my words wanted to convey.
It is a beautiful thought presented very beautifully!
It is true for all those who look at life with that out look and this write reflects your shining mood and your sanguine approach. I am glad you are sharing and spreading it through this write.
In this journey of life, we have hurdles, bumps, blocks, turns,curves and crossroads. Some make it through the park. Many may get stuck up and give up altogether. I wish they read this write and relive a blissful moment of their journey and rejuvenate themselves and continue...
Thanks for sharing...
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7 Years Ago
Thank you so much for your appreciation. Indeed, life is one big ride. It comes with what not! But i.. read moreThank you so much for your appreciation. Indeed, life is one big ride. It comes with what not! But it goes all the way, nonetheless.