Careless.

One one hand, love stands lonely.
On the other it stands disgraced.
Such is that both holds it, helplessly.
Who can conceal the cracks?
Who can caress the throbbing muscular organ?
It is true love.
But only demands to be destined otherwise.

Author's Note

Inspired by a song.

Reviews

[Raghib]

beautiful . a wonderful read

[Fahmida Mehreen]

Thanks a lot. Keep reading :)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

This is beautiful.....wonderfully written

[Fahmida Mehreen]

Thank you for the review. Keep reading! :)

[Surya]

True indeed and deep it is...
I honestly enjoyed it..:)

[Fahmida Mehreen]

Thank you for the review and appreciation.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

mesmerizing thoughts of yours!
indeed, it demands to be destined:)
jolly work, unlike the commons !!!

[Fahmida Mehreen]

Thank you, Tazeen. Your review is very encouraging. Keep reading. :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

This is worth appreciating.....
Love has got all the powers to live as well as to die... Must be handled carefully I'd you want to have for a long time...

[Fahmida Mehreen]

Absolutely as you said. True love has the power to make or break. You can never predict which way the tide shall carry you, but you cannot resist the temptation of the ride either. Such is love. :)
Thanks for your review, Anindita.

[Anindita Janhabee]

My pleasure reading...

[Kathryn Smith]

Short and sweet and POWERFUL! Well written my friend! :)
It is also so true...

[Fahmida Mehreen]

Thank you for your appreciation. :)

[Manu]

Very well written !! It speaks everything about love. :-) :-)

[Fahmida Mehreen]

Glad that you liked it. Thanks for the review. :)

[Asante]

The old saying "it takes two to tango" rings true in the realm of love, something that can't be forced into anything but a corner. It takes patience, it asks for openness, and to be destined rather than force-fed.

Ask anyone for their definition of the word "love", and you may get a grab bag's worth of slightly different responses. Albeit inspired by a song, this gave a glimpse into your thoughts toward it, and I appreciate that in itself.

Great work, Fahmida. :)

Also, I'm interested in what song inspired this!

[Fahmida Mehreen]

Thank you for your appreciation. Well, it's been quite some time that I have written this and precisely I cannot recall which song was it that brought these thoughts. But it was a classic, that I remember. :)

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Lovely poem! It reads like a song. Tyfs!

[Fahmida Mehreen]

Thank you for the appreciation.

[M P Ramesh]

FAHMIDA,

It is where the crack is hidden there appears the treasure. The fate of life is separation. Beyond irreparable loss . The sigh of relief claims and wins with a colourful sign. The pristine memories that were held ill supplement the need...it is hoped. The eventuality of creation will fly high without doubt as above.
excellent attempt ................

carry on.....

M P Ramesh

[Fahmida Mehreen]

Thank you for sharing your valuable thoughts. Keep reading. :)