For You.

For You.

A Poem by Fahmida Mehreen

The heart, the breath;
Invaded by an intoxicating soul.
Now, what? Just come to think of it:
What if this throbbing heart, reflecting the irresistible sensation like a fragile mirror, breaks apart?
What if this exhilarating breath, flying like a Pegasus, drops dead?
The sunshine days, the starlit nights;
Imprisoned by an intoxicating soul.
It is you. You.

© 2016 Fahmida Mehreen


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Leo
I like especially the beginning: "What if this throbbing heart, reflecting the irresistible sensation like a fragile mirror, breaks apart? What if this exhilarating breath, flying like a Pegasus, drops dead?" these were two great lines with wonderful analogies and rhythm..the end though wasn't as great as the above..overall I like it!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Fahmida Mehreen

8 Years Ago

Thank you for your feed back. It'll help me be better. :)
Very touching
I like it very much....
Thank you for sharing.... :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Fahmida Mehreen

8 Years Ago

Oh my! The pleasure is all mine. Much obliged to thank you for giving it your time. Keep the encoura.. read more
Unknown Poet

8 Years Ago

You are most welcomed Mehreen *Smiles*

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Fahmida Mehreen
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Dhaka, Bangladesh



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