"little talks"

hey look it's the end of another day
the sun is again leaving us away
day after day ,all the same melody
we are trying to forget the bad yesterday
we are asking god to forgive us today
so we can live tomorrow!!

Author's Note

:)

Reviews

[ANTO]

Starting anew each day just like the Sun - reflecting at night on how we lived our lives in that day - asking forgiveness for any wrongs we visiited upon others - doing this day after day is the ultimate way to be a good person.
It was a spiritual journey reading this Goldifada
thanks for sharing

[goldifada]

thank you ANTO

[Alex]

Nice work of pen. Hope to see more of your writing

[Jamestown]

Short piece with a ton of truth! I try learn as much as possible in a day
moving into the next, otherwise a day passes with little relevance! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Girl With A Pen]

This poem is pact with so much truth. It is something I think a lot of us will find ourselves doing. Wonderful poem! :)

[goldifada]

thank's a lot even if we are diffrent (in sexe ,relegion and even countries )but we are humains and that's why we share the same things!!

[Zahra]

Life goes on but what really matters is how much we've learnt and cherished our moments. Thanks for sharing this sweet poem.

[goldifada]

thank you zahra :) , i think that pain is one of the flavours of life :)