My calling

My calling

A Poem by Fabian

Its been a while.....
its been a while since i loved life
it has been a minute since i cried 
it was a second that change my life
Its been a while since...
i've failed
cried
I used to be in love
Its been a while
My how time flies i remember
my ending to my beginning
Its been nearly a year thank you
  for the memories we never made
its been a while since 
I was myself
Some say i died some say i'm not the same 
i guess there right i'm no longer lame
Because its been a while since..
falseness was apart of me
it'll be never again that i'm a phony
i will live my life the way i was born to do
i'm no longer asking for protection
but asking for greatness
I will no longer give up as that part of me disappear
i am no longer afraid of the monster inside my head

© 2016 Fabian


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Very empowering! I like the way you started the piece as if you were at your lowest and slowly built yourself up to be a powerful strong person. This poem will move young and old alike.

One suggestion: In the following stanza, you have misspelled "there"...it should be "they're "

Some say i died some say i'm not the same
i guess there right i'm no longer lame

Minor grammar error. I make them all the time :)

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Fabian
Fabian

Garefield, NJ



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A Poem by Fabian