Apathetic Acrimony

Loose me, I beg, for I am an imprisoned snarling maniac of abandonment...,
Possessed of rage, anger, and rejection.....Rabid and frothing...seething
Within and without...violence compasses my spirit...tearing at my essence...
I roar...beating at my chest...angry and swollen, weak, and empty.
Convulsing concoction of ripped emotions, torn and venting...
Spewing reckless and indiscernible screams....no one sees...
No one hears...fabric of the universe lurches backward,
Gasping...pieces held by limp fingertips...
Life creeps away into darkness again....
Cowering lump of nothingness...
Light has left...love is gone...
Fickle flame flutters...
Disbelieving...
The one has
Become
Two.....
 

Reviews

[Honeypot]

Very powerfully written! Its full of pain and anger, maybe betrayal too.
I love the format of the poem! It gives it a really cool look. This was a
great poem that flowed really nicely.

[BABSIE BEE]

Ohhhhh my !! Very descriptive and painful. Quite scarey actually for me imagining someone feeling these such strong emotions. Very cleverly put together and I feel for the lost soul. Life is hard sometimes as you decribe so well the fact that we think "this is it"....then total abondonement. We are not made to fully understand suchlikes immediately....but....time is such a healer....maybe a painful journey....but there is always the light at the end of the tunnel....I hope the pained soul and heart are healed quickly by looking out for the light in the distance...
Thank you for sharing
Babsie Bee xx