Allowed To Be

inspired by a friend of mine on Writer's Cafe

He puts words from his heart in every line; I've read them on a writer's site and you would have to be blind, not to know the tragedies he lives and sees, while, here I sit, just shooting the breeze.

This world, so big and wide, makes it difficult to be at his side, but,

I'd like him to know, there are those, who care very much and wish we knew the magic words or touch, to stop the killing, the terror, the hate, because it's never, never too late.

When will we ALL see, everyone should be allowed to be? 

Reviews

[Pax]

your heart blosom with fragrance of hope and care... well done on the message..

[Ahmad Cox]

Wow, amazingly powerful message. Wish everyone could see and understand this.

[Steven Cash]

interesting

[Mauricio Montoya]

nice work.

[Cerise]

wonderfully written...even if the lines are huge it makes sense...very nicely described the seriousness..the horror of killing...the torment and pain of others...great piece..:)

[Soul Fire]

beautiful

[Soul Fire]

lovely

[Dr. Wood ?]

what a wonderful message

[afra]

i enjoyed it ...great write