Conform Conform

Society

drowns

their fire,

to a dying

ember.

Conform,

they say,

when each soul

longs,

to just

be.

Conform,

dying ember,

to years

and years

of a slow

death

and a lifetime

of unshed

tears.

 

04/07/08

Reviews

[wizthom]

in a world where conform has become the norm.
the more we do the more we lose the inner peace that dwells inside,
build up afflictions are just bottled up emotions,
being shook up while in search of passion,
conform why when all we need is affection.peace wizthom
can i ask you something in ur icon what is he looking at,?

[SPINNING ON that dizzy ..]

This is short and perfect in its brilliance! My arms nearly went up and straight out in front of me... I can follow rules but I have lots of trouble on the conform.... haha - makes us special doesn't it.....

Kath

[Emily B]

Conform, conform.

Oh, the horror! Especially to flowers like us.

[Flow]

I use to strieve to conform to fit in, finally I realized that I didn't fit in unless I accepted me. my ambers burn bright now regardless of society.. nice write~

[forfila]

Sad yet appropriate Barbara. Simple yet in depth.
I like it :)