its wonderful how you write about this magic,it can do wonders to our lives ,it can bring such beauty in us and in others we tell about ,it can unravel secrets of live yet never told before ,it has such beauty in words that it will send us high flying and dreaming of faraway things we could even imagine them so real,we could dream of wonderful worlds so serene,no hatred ,no worries ,no pains ,and those dreams will look so lively like its in front of us i like dreamy worlds ,i got sick of realists,look what they done to our lives ,i would rather dream than really live dream and dream a lot ,may be one day these dreams come true,then its a world worthy of living,yes poetry can help us do all that and more,it is a magic world and i just love and love every word of your writing...
Poetry has been a medium of expression for centuries. That it has lasted the test of time only proves the power it has on us.
The youthful sound of innocence of the poem is refreshing and makes for a very up beat and lively read. At it's heart lies the truth, which you carry proudly on your sleeve.
Poetry is our emotions!
You do not obscure or hide the meaning or intent of the piece and in it you reflect how so many on the WC feel.
This was beautiful, I love the way you have written this and put your message across, it is wonderful.
"People write poetry for diverse reasons," -
Poetry does alot for us, we write poetry when we are unhappy, happy or whenever. Poetry helps us express our true feelings and helps us get through tough times. Sometimes it is better than actually speaking about problems because it is easier, no one asks questions directly.
"I write poetry of who, what or when,
as the blood from my heart flows to my pen."
Just a couple of my favorite lines! You speak the truth, it's great. This was great, very well written.
Your words are true. We write poetry when we are sad, happy and alone. I believe the writer also must write the truth. Wasn't for Hemingway, Helen Jackson, Twain and Nevil Shute. (So many great writers) The history would be forgotten and we would not know the truth. People who desire to write. Do have responsibility to expand the emotion of love, pain and truth. I like this poem. Made me think tonight. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote
its wonderful how you write about this magic,it can do wonders to our lives ,it can bring such beauty in us and in others we tell about ,it can unravel secrets of live yet never told before ,it has such beauty in words that it will send us high flying and dreaming of faraway things we could even imagine them so real,we could dream of wonderful worlds so serene,no hatred ,no worries ,no pains ,and those dreams will look so lively like its in front of us i like dreamy worlds ,i got sick of realists,look what they done to our lives ,i would rather dream than really live dream and dream a lot ,may be one day these dreams come true,then its a world worthy of living,yes poetry can help us do all that and more,it is a magic world and i just love and love every word of your writing...
I am retired from the Postal Service. I find I write poetry to help myself through difficult times and I have written many poems in response to the chronic pain I've been living with for over 30 year.. more..