Barbara, this is a delightful ode to laughter, as well as a heartfelt testimonial, you encorporate
smoothe rhymes, which in turn creates a sharper image, and allows for a subtle, punctually emotional
impact in succession, encouragong, one can feel your pain, as well as the main emphasis on laughter,
the knowledgable meaning has an uplifting effect reflecting what keeps the heart going, I'm
sure many people can relate in one way or another, reveals your thoughts like an open book.
i like how your staying postive through the hard times....... like a champion you have to get back up after youve been knocked down... its a inspiring poem..... laughter is the tool along with family and friends to begin the best chapters in our life.... very nice write
So true! We laugh and then we heal! It's the only sure cure for what ails us. :) Power of soul and spirit all bundled up in a jolly "HA HA HA" is just what the doctor orders!
Wonderfully crafted poem. I liked the flow, and could find nothing off with grammer or anything else.
Barbara, this is a delightful ode to laughter, as well as a heartfelt testimonial, you encorporate
smoothe rhymes, which in turn creates a sharper image, and allows for a subtle, punctually emotional
impact in succession, encouragong, one can feel your pain, as well as the main emphasis on laughter,
the knowledgable meaning has an uplifting effect reflecting what keeps the heart going, I'm
sure many people can relate in one way or another, reveals your thoughts like an open book.
Posted 16 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
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pain can be a constant reminder that we are alive, it must be difficult though to be constantly reminded, Laughter is a healer on ones mind and soul. Your pen writes truths and I enjoy the pictures of life that it paints.
Yes, laughter is the best medicine. I love your positive attitude despite all you have went through. This is an uplifting poem and I see so much hope here.
I am retired from the Postal Service. I find I write poetry to help myself through difficult times and I have written many poems in response to the chronic pain I've been living with for over 30 year.. more..