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A Poem by Barbara Walker
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why I have written on a certain subject and what I've learned about myself through it all.

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On the subject of pain,

I've written quite a few,

if I didn't, I'm sure,

mental illness would ensue.

I've undergone 17 surgeries in my life

and no matter your age,

that can cause a lot of strife.

 

Needing someone to help you,

for yourself and for your house,

hoping they're thorough and honest, too.

Always aware of how you are feeling,

you do everything you can,

to facilitate your healing.

 

But my body will never be the same,

despite all the surgeries

and there's no one to blame.

I've held onto my love of laughter,

I won't let that be taken from me,

I'll continue to enjoy it forever after!

 

04/14/08 

 

© 2010 Barbara Walker


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Barbara, this is a delightful ode to laughter, as well as a heartfelt testimonial, you encorporate
smoothe rhymes, which in turn creates a sharper image, and allows for a subtle, punctually emotional
impact in succession, encouragong, one can feel your pain, as well as the main emphasis on laughter,
the knowledgable meaning has an uplifting effect reflecting what keeps the heart going, I'm
sure many people can relate in one way or another, reveals your thoughts like an open book.



Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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i like how your staying postive through the hard times....... like a champion you have to get back up after youve been knocked down... its a inspiring poem..... laughter is the tool along with family and friends to begin the best chapters in our life.... very nice write

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So true! We laugh and then we heal! It's the only sure cure for what ails us. :) Power of soul and spirit all bundled up in a jolly "HA HA HA" is just what the doctor orders!

Wonderfully crafted poem. I liked the flow, and could find nothing off with grammer or anything else.

Keep up the Smiles and the belly Laughs! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Barbara, this is a delightful ode to laughter, as well as a heartfelt testimonial, you encorporate
smoothe rhymes, which in turn creates a sharper image, and allows for a subtle, punctually emotional
impact in succession, encouragong, one can feel your pain, as well as the main emphasis on laughter,
the knowledgable meaning has an uplifting effect reflecting what keeps the heart going, I'm
sure many people can relate in one way or another, reveals your thoughts like an open book.



Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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pain can be a constant reminder that we are alive, it must be difficult though to be constantly reminded, Laughter is a healer on ones mind and soul. Your pen writes truths and I enjoy the pictures of life that it paints.

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

laughter is always the best medicine...without it, we would just be crying all the time. i can relate to that.

a good write, Barbara.

Always,

Amanda

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Yes, laughter is the best medicine. I love your positive attitude despite all you have went through. This is an uplifting poem and I see so much hope here.

I enjoyed!

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

The message is Clear Barbara...your words rain down like little tears opening the hearts and minds for those to feel. Nicely written...Ralphy

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

I like your rhyming scheme. Good job!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Barbara Walker
Barbara Walker

Lake Havasu City, AZ



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I am retired from the Postal Service. I find I write poetry to help myself through difficult times and I have written many poems in response to the chronic pain I've been living with for over 30 year.. more..

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