Writing Poems

why I have written on a certain subject and what I've learned about myself through it all.

 

On the subject of pain,

I've written quite a few,

if I didn't, I'm sure,

mental illness would ensue.

I've undergone 17 surgeries in my life

and no matter your age,

that can cause a lot of strife.

 

Needing someone to help you,

for yourself and for your house,

hoping they're thorough and honest, too.

Always aware of how you are feeling,

you do everything you can,

to facilitate your healing.

 

But my body will never be the same,

despite all the surgeries

and there's no one to blame.

I've held onto my love of laughter,

I won't let that be taken from me,

I'll continue to enjoy it forever after!

 

04/14/08 

 

Reviews

[Michael X]

Barbara, this is a delightful ode to laughter, as well as a heartfelt testimonial, you encorporate
smoothe rhymes, which in turn creates a sharper image, and allows for a subtle, punctually emotional
impact in succession, encouragong, one can feel your pain, as well as the main emphasis on laughter,
the knowledgable meaning has an uplifting effect reflecting what keeps the heart going, I'm
sure many people can relate in one way or another, reveals your thoughts like an open book.

[Legion]

It's a rough way to leave. I've watched my wife go through it (which in turn means I go through it somewhat) and it isn't something I wish on anyone. As long as the laughter never dies though, it is bearable.

[bluessadmood]

oh such pain and strife in a easy life,it could bring down a whole mountain,but please hold on ,your laugh keep it always on your moth,i am sure this is no life,i could feel your words more than you think,i just known lots of people in so much pain ,by profession,i did everything i could to ease their pain,i hope one day you will find rest ,i hope it comes easy ,and i really feel for you a lot...

[None]

Sharing your pain helps us to comfort you in a small way here. I'm glad you are alright and I'm sorry for all you have been through! Stay well and happy! Good poem.

[kurrupted]

this piece is a nice one so amazing how it was scripted to have the multi-facet concept (incoperating the essence of writting of pain and it's remedy)...well penned ,i love its flow and indeed portraying the mother of all medicines vis a vis the pains you went through (ITS ABSOLUTELY TRUE, LAUGHTER IS THE BEST MEDICINE)........WISH YOU THE QUICKEST RECURPERATION.

[Illegitimate Artist]

I love that you can turn your pain into something so beautiful and also be brave enough to share it with the rest of use."I won't let that be taken from me,
I'll enjoy it forever after!" Are my favorite lines. You're ability to hold tight to that laughter is nothing short of inspiring! Kudos to you!

[Sandra Rains DeBusk]

Barbara, you are like me, you write about you or someone, something that has to do with you.
There is nothing wrong with this.
Pain needs a release, you, like me, we release it through writing.

I feel this writing of yours and understand it.
Good writing.

[lori c]

laughter, so it is said, is the best medicine. and i also hold that the brain truly can only concentrate on one process at a time. when we are busy seeking the positive in any situation, we have no time and place to dwell on the negative. i am so uplifted that writing can be therapy for you, pulling you over to the rainbows, and away from the threatening storms. thank you for this insight into your spirit. you have uplifted mine today. :) this is a write that should be shared with any who are hurting. well done.

[Kaleidoscope Apocalypse]

This is a wonderful piece; it is both heartfelt and inspiring. Your rhythm is well put together and your words ring true. I think most people could relate to this poem in one way or another. I commend you on your ability to capture this feeling so wonderfully and your strength in writing something that can be so very personal. Certainly a job well done!

[forfila]

Laughter is the best medicine because it works from the inside out. It is testament to your strength and charisma to maintain the inner ability to be free no matter what. Very admirable and encouraging, now I just wish more souls would seek the benefit of the wisdom that is so obviously within you =)

Love
Me

[Lorraine Pearson]

Thank heavens there is no surgery that can remove the "love of laughter!" It is the only healer of everything! I enjoyed relating to this piece. Smiles.
~Lorraiyne