Spring

Many shades of green,

in striking hues,

flowers blazing forth

in dazzling shades of

golds, reds and blues.

The breeze tickling my face,

sun staying up longer

in the sky.

Bird's singing louder and longer.

I love you, Spring,

that's why.

04/23/04

Reviews

[Michael X]

lovely, sweet and pastel barabra, poetry that sets the readers heart adrift,
floating on springtime clouds, i love how your words create an environment for the
readers thoughts to rest at bay, its peaceful, and beautifully envisioned,
one can feel the sense of encouragemtn in your words, mike

[Craig2591]

You have just described what's happening here in Ohio right now. Very nice.

[Coyote Poetry]

Me too. I love Spring. Still waiting for it in Michigan. A very good description for the season of Spring. Warm days of Spring bring alive even the sad in spirit. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Jake Botha]

Barbara,

You capture the fresh new feeling of spring great here.

Jake

[Barbara Walker]

Thank you Jake!

[s y e]

Awwwah, this is lovely. Such a sweet write, the imagery was perfect and it made it feel like the reader was there, captured the readers attention.

"The breeze tickling my face,
sun staying up longer"

Aaah, I just wish I had some sun! Haha, I love the way you ended it, such a cutie!

[Barbara Walker]

Thanks so much!

[lori c]

i am into reading anything about spring as i am so anxious for it to come in full force. this is filled with some great images. both visually and audibly. nice write.

[Moonlit-Blues]

Sweetly worded, evocative.