Just

Just

A Poem by Barbara Walker

Can you just make me some eggs?

Can you just get up and get me this?

Can you just get up and get me that?

Can you just go to the store and buy me a coke?

Can you just scratch my back?

Can you just massage my feet?

My back and neck are killing me,

do you just mind if I weep?

 

11/02

© 2010 Barbara Walker


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Haha, that's like me at the moment, asking for everything cause I've hurt my foot and can't walk, so I'm asking my brother and gran for everything, haha. This made me giggle cause it was like you wrote this knowing it's what I do.... Which you obviously don't but ya know..... haha.

Nicely done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Barbara Walker

11 Years Ago

Oh, you have a reason for asking, this person was lazy!
s y e

11 Years Ago

Haha, I do it all the time!
It is extremely hrd to refuse what seems a reasonable request but it gets easier with practice

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Barbara Walker
Barbara Walker

Lake Havasu City, AZ



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I am retired from the Postal Service. I find I write poetry to help myself through difficult times and I have written many poems in response to the chronic pain I've been living with for over 30 year.. more..

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