Marital Bliss

Behind the flaming arrows of insults

and periodic declarations of war,

they realized true domestic hiss!!

11/29/06

Reviews

[Ahmad Cox]

I really liked this. It describes a lot of relationships actually

[Mauricio Montoya]

great piece, love how it comes together and it saids alot for such a short piece.

[Matty Bosox]

Straight and to the point and just like most Marriages, very quick LoL But with how short it is, very extreme and powerful and perfectly described...Good job Barbara...Its very difficult to turn a couple of words into a powerful poem..

[Dr. Wood ?]

And they lived happily ever after?

[Craig2591]

Been married 32 years and there were times that I thought we were going to KILL each other. It's been a bumpy and enjoyable ride. Still going strong, though.

Nice poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

The longer I'm marry. More I learn to be quiet and not negative. Negative words last in wife's memory for 20 years. I like your poem. Nice ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Cole Hayley]

Very diffrent write for you, but I love it

[thecoolone52]

OHHH i liked that alot, i thought it was gona be a crappy lovey dovey thing. Unexpected and i really liked it... marriage sucks sometimes, thats why im not getin married hahahahha