Ziggy Dog

This is about my loyal dog

Ziggy, named after a drummer at six weeks old. 

Sat on my shoulders as I drove,

now he sits shotgun, 

sometimes with his face in the sun. 

Like a baby with a blanket, I fall asleep stroking his hair.

Others may leave, but Ziggy's always there.

Reviews

[Cole Hayley]

Hey Barbra,

I really enjoy this. It has a very nice innocence to it, and you can tell it's very loving. Time does move quickly and I think you captured that nicely here

[Barbara Walker]

Thanks, my friend!

[Unknown Poet]

Well said.. Very true pets are always the dearest companions... :)

[Barbara Walker]

Thank you, Uday. I wrote this for a contest here on WC and placed in it which did my ego some good!

[❀ Gabriela ..]

Hehe, this was cute!! Dogs can be such wonderful companions; like part of the family! Great little poem :)

[Barbara Walker]

Thank you for reviewing Gabriela!

[B. Boileau]

Nothing like the unconditional love and loyalty a dog brings.
This brings a huge smile.

[Barbara Walker]

Thank you!

[TL Boehm]

A nice one. I am for the first time since I was two, completely petless and I dislike it much. Last year our two canines and our feline passed, and right before we moved we had to rehome my parrot. It stings. A lot

[Barbara Walker]

Ouch! I am so sorry you lost any of your loves, but very deep sadness when you lose them all. They really give a lot of love and companionship. I hate to see someone get a dog, then leave it tied up in the yard alone all the time. It's heartbreaking. Makes you want to take in all the rescue animals. Thank you for reviewing my poem.

[Einstein Noodle]

i love this human and refreshing poem ..so relatable ... there is nothing like a "good" dog .. Bella the wonder dog is with me in my avatar ... and i love her snuggles and kisses (rarely given) she is such a s**t sometimes ;)
E.

[Barbara Walker]

Thanks, E! S***s that they can be, when everyone has left, I still have my Ziggy!

[Einstein Noodle]

sending hugs ....and the best day ever for you!

[Shannon]

Awe he sounds precious! I am curious about the line that is longer "Like a baby...", why it is a single line, rather divided into two?

[Barbara Walker]

When I wrote it, I pondered those lines and I wanted gun and sun to rhyme and hair and there to rhyme.

[Shannon]

Makes a lot of sense. Early morning, read rhyming pattern as random.