I Wrote This Rap Song For You

I like to stay in communication with my grandchildren and it can be a challenge. For my granddaughter, Robyn.

Check your messages, I had something to say
and messaging you was the only way.
I can dig it, I know your life is full,
You never have enough time and that's no bull!
But, when you get a minute, remember who I am,
the one who adores and loves you-your old Gram
And I wrote this rap song for you,
instead of a telegram!

Reviews

[Samuel Dickens]

Heh-heh, yeah, she really wouldn't know what to think about a telegram. I still haven't learned to text. (Could that be why I never hear from my grandchildren?) Rapping AND texting? You're one grandma who's really on top of this stuff! You made me grin, Barbara.

[Barbara Walker]

Thanks Samuel! Makes me feel good to make you smile. I blew this granddaughters mind when she visited a few years ago...she had on "her" radio station and I sang along with one of beyonces songs. I knew all the words, lol. It's not just her station! I loved the look on her face! Rock and roll and rapping grandma...I'm a great grandma too! Shocks me too!

[Unknown Poet]

Very cute and nice...
Thank you for sharing :)

[Barbara Walker]

Thank you!

[Unknown Poet]

Welcome :)

[A. Amos]

Your grand kids are lucky to have a cool granny :) keep coming my friend!

[Barbara Walker]

Ahhh thanks

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome my dear...

[Gee]

Go Barbara,gettin' down wiff de yoof.A fun read,nicely done

[Barbara Walker]

Thankyou, Gee!

[1]

Barbara the rapper! Very nice..........

[Barbara Walker]

Thank you!

[magenta24uk]

Love it. Short but sweet. I may just leave this as my next message. I can feel the beat. :)

[kurrupted]

With a slow beat and a gentle string , this could be excellent a skit in an album.
The album should be titled "Ganny on tha mic" and should have tracks like "San Diego to Babba". I really like it.

[Barbara Walker]

Hello Babba! Thank you for the kind words! Whenever I know you've been on writerscafe it brings a smile to my face to see you taking a moment to relax! I'll send an email soon for updates.

[❀ Gabriela ..]

Hehe!! This is cute; perfect, "hip" way to say hello :)

[Dr. Wood ?]

bet that hit the mark...Great idea...One I may well STEAL.......if that is ok with YOU

[Barbara Walker]

Thank you , Doc! No theft needed, use it if it will help! Worked for me.

[Dr. Wood ?]

ok...Watch this space

[Barbara Walker]

Ok and here are characters i must type to have ten or more

[Andrew N. Farrens]

Good flow in the verse. Very nice......