Rearranged

Not talking about furniture here...

I am in a stew,

all because of you...

suddenly, you've changed,

totally rearranged...

what is going on in your mind,

I'm getting contradictory signs.

This is all coming out of the blue,

no warning, not one little clue.

You've pulled the rug from under me, so fast:

I thought ours was a love that would last.

I am so angry, that you would throw us aside,

I feel I've been taken for a ride

and no matter what you do,

I can never feel the same for you,

so now, we are changed,

rearranged...and what makes me cry?

You don't even know why.

Reviews

[lori c]

brutally honest feelings here and ones i can relate too. i do hope that you've been able to rearrange your life, in bits and pieces, to come to a level of comfort, it takes so long and so much effort to do so. so go ahead and have a good cry and then make the days count. you've got this !

[Einstein Noodle]

honest and emotive approach .. no denying .. makes me think of my sister and her slug of a husband that came home "out of the blue" after 10 yrs and said .. "I don't love you any more" .. still boils in my veins .. what a s**t for brains .. shacked up with his younger trollop who kicked him out after only months .. took my sister years to recover .. rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!
very straight forward poem .. no enigma .. no metaphor .. ;)
E.

[Barbara Walker]

Thank you E. So sorry your sister had to experience this. For me, the not seeing it coming blew my mind. Was I that oblivious or could he throw us away so easily and if he could, he wasn't the man I thought he was, which opened up another big can of worms for me.

[Einstein Noodle]

i hear you sister .. loud and clear .. blessings of hope and healing sending your way :}

[Mauricio Montoya]

I know this is serious piece but I like how comes together with such rhythm and rhyme and right to the point. actually I'd like to add this to my library.
Excellent write.

[Barbara Walker]

Ah Maurice just now did I find that you read this piece eight months ago! Thank you for reading and commenting. Honored to be in your library

[Celestial Witch Child]

Sheer perfection as always. Keep writing out those sorrows and you'll win a literary award. (;

[Barbara Walker]

Thank you so much!

[Craig2591]

It's good that you have your writing to help you vent your frustration. Well said.

[Barbara Walker]

You're right about that! Thanks Craig!

[s y e]

This is so sad, B. When your whole world just seems to crash. There is so much emotion in this one, it's really sad. Just about made me cry

[Barbara Walker]

Thank you fpr reading.

[Frieda P]

Oh that's the pits when it happens as such, having your entire world shattered unsuspectingly in that manner is quite the upheaval....well said, I like the furniture analogy.

[Barbara Walker]

Thanks, my friend.

[Tate Morgan]

Hi Barbera So sorry to see this one today Hope you are alright
Tate

[Barbara Walker]

Hi Tate! Thanks for reading. Well, I must say the last 6 months have been challenging, to say the least. I'll be okay, in fact, I predict I'll be fine!