Lost In A Daze Of Confusion

When you think all is fine in a relationship and suddenly, it's not.

I'm lost in a daze of confusion,
suddenly, your positive attitude is gone.
I guess I was living an illusion,
of a special, solid bond.

It is obvious somethings upset you,
why can't you be open with me?
I want us to feel free in all that we do,
with true love, that's the way it should be.

I would like to lay it on the line,
talk it out, find a solution, compromise.
Nothing, but resentment, comes from lies;
why waste time, like a child who whines?

Loving someone,
does not make you read minds,
when all is said and done,
words...are the ties that bind.

So, don't keep it inside,
please, share it with me,
open your mouth wide
and let the words flow free

Life is so short, there is no time,
to waste on anger and sadness.
I am yours and you are mine;
I want ours to be a life of happiness..

Reviews

[Craig2591]

"Loving someone,
does not make you read minds". I like that! I have to remind my wife from time to time that after 32 years of marriage, I still can't read her mind!

There's a good message in this poem.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Right to the point, well done.

[Pax]

openness in communication is the main key for a relationship to last long...
Great message my friend..

[J. Viands]

Well written always relatable topic keep it up

[afra]

great write

[Celestial Witch Child]

If one day I could write as well and as frequently as you do, I would die a happy girl.

[Barbara Walker]

Thank you but you're a great writer, too!

[Celestial Witch Child]

Aww, shucks! Lol. (: Thanks.

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard when unknown separate us. Hard to keep open communication in our busy world. I could feel the stress and the desire to understand. I like the positive ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Dr. Wood ?]

communication IS the key to any relationship...this was very succinct and honest..A wonderful poem

[Redrascalstrawberry]

This is so true. Life is a mortal journey and you do have to communicate to pass your message to the other person. If you just keep on wasting this time, you'll be left unheard. Good write!

[Ahmad Cox]

So true. Sometimes you have to communicate to be heard.