Solace

Solace

A Poem by K.P.H.M
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noun; comfort or consolation in times of distress or sadness.

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As the precipitation clings to my skin,

I stand here,

Ready to begin.


Painted face,

Melted away.

My false persona,

Is circling the drain.


The coldness seeped under my skin,

Until I grow numb.

Smiling, I turned my head to the sky,

Not long before the rain ends,

Not long until till I can feel again.

© 2023 K.P.H.M


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This is a very impressive poem in that it has excellent imagery and word choice. I especially love the line, "Painted face,
Melted away.
My false persona,
Is circling the drain

I could relate to those images very well. One often feels this way after loss of composure in trying and testing times. I could also relate this to someone facing moments of anxiety before a public performance of some kind. Perhaps, these are my feelings because I'm often required to speak in gatherings and I suffer from stage fright. This was a great poem to read today.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

K.P.H.M

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for your comment! I'm glad you enjoyed reading it and that you found it relatable... read more
AYVID N

1 Year Ago

You are most welcome.



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This is a very impressive poem in that it has excellent imagery and word choice. I especially love the line, "Painted face,
Melted away.
My false persona,
Is circling the drain

I could relate to those images very well. One often feels this way after loss of composure in trying and testing times. I could also relate this to someone facing moments of anxiety before a public performance of some kind. Perhaps, these are my feelings because I'm often required to speak in gatherings and I suffer from stage fright. This was a great poem to read today.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

K.P.H.M

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for your comment! I'm glad you enjoyed reading it and that you found it relatable... read more
AYVID N

1 Year Ago

You are most welcome.
"Not long until I can feel again " I think this final line just gathers all of this and brings it where it needs to be. You are an awesome poet and I am so thankful to find something new from you. Amazing. I need more

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

K.P.H.M

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much my friend! That is such a kind thing to say, I hopefully will be able to post more.. read more
You did a really great job writing this. I love it.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

K.P.H.M

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much! I appreciate your comment
light and ashes

1 Year Ago

You are very welcome, lady! It was well deserved.

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Added on March 18, 2023
Last Updated on March 18, 2023
Tags: happiness, spring, seasonal depression, healing, light, hope, shake it out, it's always darkest before the d

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K.P.H.M
K.P.H.M

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