Defective

Defective

A Poem by K.P.H.M
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adjective; imperfect or faulty

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I’m terrible at writing good love poems,

Because unrequited is all I know. 

I’ve always been the second choice, 

Someone you think about fondly, 

In fleeting memories,

Or the missed opportunity, 

But if I’m everyone’s missed opportunity, 

Then no one is left to love me. 

© 2022 K.P.H.M


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'But if I'm everyone's missed opportunity." What a cool way to express those feelings. I liked this a lot. I could feel this..

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

K.P.H.M

2 Years Ago

Thank you! I appreciate your feedback. That was my favourite line as well.
Keep writing poems like this one KP and someone going to start loving you. Moon-eyed poets, are like planets orbiting, eventually they run into one another

Ken

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

K.P.H.M

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your review Ken! I agree. Time will tell!

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Added on September 21, 2022
Last Updated on September 21, 2022
Tags: falling in love, unrequited love, spring, second choice, on the sidelines

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K.P.H.M
K.P.H.M

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A romantic cynic for who poetry is an escape and healing. I hope you enjoy. more..

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A Poem by K.P.H.M