Let Me out

This was just something I made up a few days ago. Tell me what you think.

    I've spent so long
    In the darkness
    I've forgotten
    All of life's sounds
    How the birds sing
    How they beat their wings
    How the wind blows
    And the silence of snow
    I've forgotten
    How beautiful
    The stars are at night
    I've forgotten
    How mystical
    Was the moonlight
    I've forgotten
    The way the sun shines
    So bright

    I'm so cold
    I can't feet my skin
    I'm so numb

    Let me out
    Let me wander free
    I need to leave
    I can't stay here any longer
    I need to be able to breathe
    Again
    So please let me go
    My friend

    We've spent so long
    In the darkness
    We've forgotten
    How to care
    How to love one
    How to be one's
    True self

    We've become so cold
    We can't feel our own hearts
    We've become so numb

    Let me out
    Let me wander free
    I need to leave
    I can't stay here any longer
    I need to be able to breathe
    Again
    So please let me go
    My friend

    We've been underground
    So long
    Never found what
    We've been longing
    For

    I'm so cold
    I can't feel my skin
    I've become so numb

    Let me out
    Let me wander free
    I need to leave
    I can't stay here any longer
    I need to breathe
    Again
    So please understand
    Let go of my hands
    So please understand
    My friend

Reviews

[Lost in Wonderland]

this is very good. so true and beautiful it sounds like it could be a song