my sweet death

it's a little philosophical writing ,it talk about the main thing that concern everyone ,wish that you love it and please let me know about your opinion

she make us smile, she make us cry ,she makes us sad and she makes us happy .there's always she and there's always hope with her .but sometimes you given up believing her and you given up thinking about what she will do for you tomorrow.

It’s not because you are not dreaming anymore and not because you are stop thinking about the future to .it's only because you lost everything: because of her. You lost everything that you have built; you lost the entire person that you met. But the worst you lost yourself.

Sometimes you can't find any solution to deal with her. To make her stop, controlling your life.

So you think to kill yourself, but you find out even with that she still controls you .yes she control you.

so the only thing you will feel happy to do to make her mad, is to do silly things ,to have fun ,to do all the wrong things .you think that you win for a while but she look at you smiling. And that smile makes you angry, that smile kills you inside, she still strong and you are too weak .she still right and you still wrong.

You are alone and she has everyone. You are sad and she feed herself from your sadness. you are lost but she still there to guide you to the way .but all what you have to do it's to admit, that you loved her even with her defects.  Just admit that you can't live without her .cause she makes you brief, because she is your life.

She is the life…Unfortunately

Author's Note

it's a little philosophical writing ,it talk about the main thing that concern everyone ,wish that you love it and please let me know about your opinion

Reviews

[Pencrafter]

Your story talks about the stress which comes from trying to be someone's friend. But, no matter how much you may want someone to like you and respect you, sometimes it might not be a good match. It's better to not allow someone to rob you of your happiness. There are other people out there and one of those could become a real friend. Your story conveys cogent emotion and feeling. The writing has many errors in English grammar and punctuation. However, to your credit the idea, the message, still shines through. To me, this make it a successful communication. Nice job.

[Eya Ben Ali]

thank you :)