Under the Stars

Let me take you there
To a place under the stars
A place where no one Knows you
A place where we can hideout

Well just sit and stare
Stare into each others eyes
And share that special bond
And well stay there forever

Let me take you there
To a place under the stars
A place where no one Knows you
A place where we can hideout

We'll live together
We'll live forever
Just leave out all the rest
All we need is each other
And we'll live forever

The moon light will wash us
Clean us of worry
Leave us free and alive
We'll share that time
And always keep it sacred

Let me take you there
To a place under the stars
A place where no one Knows you
A place where we can hideout

Reviews

[Sabbath_Nikole]

I really dig your message. It's quite positive, hopeful. One word that seems out of place is "hideout." It sounds harsher than all the other words when you read the poem out loud and it sticks out. It's not as soft. I really enjoyed this piece keep up the good work!

[WriterMe]

Oh what a beautiful picture you have created. A truly wondrous sight to bask beneath stars =] Great work.