The Demise.

The Demise.

A Poem by exotic flotsam
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A short story about love killing itself.

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Your inspired passion I admire

Righteous, wickedness justifies

Your hatred, your soul’s fire

You want me to hate you like diseased flies

Your impiety cannot compel immorality

I don’t hate you

You lose and your religion with hypocrisy

I hate what you do

© 2013 exotic flotsam


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when the last of an emotion surfaces, what becomes of the broken heart
in light of a memory, this poem has an enhanced feeling of death,
a destroying and a failure giving way to understanding, move beyond
suffering, wow, the depth and clarity is striking, brilliantly worded ^_^

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Love the sinner, hate the sin comes to mind reading this.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

when the last of an emotion surfaces, what becomes of the broken heart
in light of a memory, this poem has an enhanced feeling of death,
a destroying and a failure giving way to understanding, move beyond
suffering, wow, the depth and clarity is striking, brilliantly worded ^_^

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 8, 2012
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exotic flotsam
exotic flotsam

Bellevue, WA



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