Deceit

Deceit

A Poem by exotic flotsam
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A Haiku about love's trust shattered by deceit.

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I thought I knew you

I heard, believed, loved

You lie in deceit

© 2012 exotic flotsam


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i hate people that mislead and lie, great haiku.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thank you for reading my work. Your insight into this piece roots in the unforgivable. This deceit steps well over the decency line. I appreciate your review. Feel free to sample any of my work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Deceit, always the unforgiving culprit ,,,good write

Posted 12 Years Ago


short and emotional, great job with a great title :D

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on February 22, 2012
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exotic flotsam
exotic flotsam

Bellevue, WA



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