Deceit
A Poem by
exotic flotsam
A Haiku about love's trust shattered by deceit.
I thought I knew you
I heard, believed, loved
You lie in deceit
© 2012 exotic flotsam
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i hate people that mislead and lie, great haiku.
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Thank you for reading my work. Your insight into this piece roots in the unforgivable. This deceit steps well over the decency line. I appreciate your review. Feel free to sample any of my work.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Thank you for reading my work. Your insight into this piece roots in the unforgivable. This deceit steps well over the decency line. I appreciate your review. Feel free to sample any of my work.
Deceit, always the unforgiving culprit ,,,good write
Posted 12 Years Ago
Deceit, always the unforgiving culprit ,,,good write
short and emotional, great job with a great title :D
Posted 12 Years Ago
short and emotional, great job with a great title :D
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Added on February 22, 2012
Last Updated on February 22, 2012
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exotic flotsam Bellevue, WA
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I'm an adrenaline junkie former lawyer stay at home Dad, infatuated with elevated writing.
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