Slipping AwayA Poem by exotic flotsamSlice view into an invisible American culture.
see the thin white ring, worn right through
his daddy's blue overalls pocket, tobacco tins to become a man here, every boy must chew, etching their manly brawn, and so it begins see fate's clotting cloud subsume daddy; the Keres' black gleaming rails midst his hope's feckless dream, fragments echo mist of another way black gleam lowers mine trolleys into the underworld, where all life fails, for families, miners, Daddy, light and life, the Guide, he prays every day all the boys think, "I want to be a man, just like my Daddy." for they believe they are men too now, every day feeling old enough for the edge, spiritus raptor, boy to man, man to miner, miner to dust old enough are none, to follow the benighted path, only for the rough, old enough are none, to force themselves on the seam, yet they must youth's dreams overlaid daily, under manifest sooty ash snowflakes their legacy: ever the deeper, ever the darker, ever the reaper optimism, faith in themselves, in life, for their children, suffocates we care not, ours is whatever we want, the oblivious sweeper fathers and father's firefly shadows before them, yoked by our covetousness optimism collapses to doubt, doubt to skepticism, skepticism to cynicism, cynicism to resignation yet the boy dreams, for what it is worth, of slipping away from the Sisyphian abyss to commutation the Hole is their Whole, all they need to know, no place to go outside their hollar, none care; ostracized, overlooked by our world, a place none here have been, a place none will ever know they know we know them not, care not, our empathy coldly furled "Come on over and see boys, the Hole is who we are". beautiful God given dutiful faces, luminous eyes, eroded away like silt, lost, life's wonder, it's joy, quarried away with a hewer's 18 pound pick soft black rock, fueling our lives; fatal raven dust, the price each day cost now he sees, putter's black gleaming rails, fiendish fate's cruel trick each dark dawn, clean shaven faces, toting lunch pails, they talk, then, by rail, they fall, Bevin's boys still, conscripted by our want, we offer them a perfect black veil, lung squall "Its their choice, isn't it?", we'll take what they offer, but not them our perishable notice flickers earnestly, important when expendable souls collapse on vicarious national media coverage, parasites, piercing suspended grief, only then, only then does rise our vapid empathy, stained by specious prayer salvage raised from relentless withering catacombs, hoisted at dark day's end, into dark night, never reaching a goal heeding embedded culture, destiny unspoken, by us they know what this is: not right, yet they labor our coal coal keeps the lights on, these lives, we have won except, that boy, life bled late one night, stealing into his feathery dream's whisper, in this dark, his light, he fled, slipping away This is an observation of a group of people. Character development is generalized to include any of the culture itself. Dark, yet not without one flicker of hope.
Spirtus raptor (Lat.): transfer of the body of a saint the Lower World; breath ravisher hewer: loosens rock and minerals in a mine, on their sides, deepest in a shaft, the hewer works 7 hours a day without coming to the surface. Keres: Death Spirits; Death Fates; Doom Bevin's boys: conscripted to work in the coal mines, vital, but largely unrecognized service Putters: brought empty coal tubs up to the coal face and took loaded tubs to the pit bottom 40% of our low emission feel good electric cars derive their power from coal fired plants Recommended films, "The Devil's Miners"; "The 33" © 2016 exotic flotsamAuthor's Note
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Added on September 10, 2016 Last Updated on September 10, 2016 Tags: duty, labor, doom, ope, insight, forgotten people, another world, destiny Authorexotic flotsamBellevue, WAAboutI'm an adrenaline junkie former lawyer stay at home Dad, infatuated with elevated writing. more..Writing
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