Wound

its something.. i dont know what it is.. but its something.. tell me what this is about..

The open wound would not heal,

around 12 years old it began to steal

began to take began to drain

offered supplement from its bloody stain

kept me wishing and dreaming true

kept me away from what was you

lied to me and stole my youth

put a gun in my hand, made me bulletproof

made others love just what i am

even if for just a turning glance I forced his hand

made me a family through my skin

bled me bored me begin again

adjust adjuticated to co-incide

i rule half this world with my own sweet pride

my faults my failure and my guilt

creating others from this wound i cannot heal. 

Reviews

[Shauna Jacqueline Ander..]

A good read.

[Starr Mist]

I like this a lot! I could picture everything... just as if it was my own past. Thanks for posting!

Starr Mist

[Liz]

I really like this, it's one of the few i've read in awhile that interests me greatly. Favorite line would have to be "I rule half this world with my own sweet pride". Really nice job!

[Layla J Omorose]

A very good write. I really enjoyed this poem. I especially like the last lines of the poem. Its brings it all together and slams the poem home. good work

[Destinyxi]

adjust adjuticated to co-incide
i rule half this world with my own sweet pride

Love that part the most. Good write. Love the rhyming.

[Wretched Knight]

Mmmm. very good!

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

I love this. I can't even... I have no words. Just fantastic.

[R.A. Youngblood]

I can totally relate to this, i like your "free verse stanza" style and your flow of thoughts. This is very emotional, and you can read it again and again, it's never out of your head. Wonderful!
Thanks for sharing..Keep it up :D

[selkietales]

Awesome sauce! This was really good and it flows well :)

[Pritesh]

Greatly done!i like the way you write!keep writing poem like this!