Small Thoughts

I think I wrote it is October 2013

Solid rays of endearing hope

tie our legs together.

The eminent glow of chance is a midst

and we're a curious species of man.

We inhabit a vessel

for 80 some years

but weather it's fragile casings.

If all is a lie 

and we live just to die

what keeps these hearts a beating?

As Summer falls and Winter springs

the humans pass time with menial things

in solidarity stature

the purpose gets frayed

but congenial actions

are counted and saved.

Confused and contradicting

beliefs conflicting

and our purpose subject to change.

We try to get by

and know not why

but steady our minds

by not closing the blinds

that inside ourselves we create.

Reviews

[Ai Lun]

It's a very good poem! The fist stanza describes the reason behind why I live my life in the manner that I do. I feel that we have to make life mean something to ourselves otherwise it's all a waste of time, for life (I believe) has no natural set meaning.

[Kahtia Howard]

Thank you for reviewing it! I'm happy to hear you like it.

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write. Small thoughts can have major impact too...Bravo...............

[Kahtia Howard]

Thank you very much!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome ...:)....................