survival 2.0

survival 2.0

A Poem by a bad habit

a warrior, alive, bruised, mutilated.
the swords his teeth, and he  h u n g e r s
for the violence, the pain,
the nectar, of a storm.
he is a warrior; 
he is rage.

© 2024 a bad habit


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great write.. ...........

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


One wonders what this individual survived to make him stay in combat readiness. Is this a case of PTSD?

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Hungry words, needing to take and break yet.. needful for a remedy - protection from what or whoever created that pain.

The presentation suggests a falling from grace or a place where the earthquake struck? Maybe

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 25, 2024
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Tags: warrior, rage, nectar, honey, violence, poetry

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