Days Erased

It's been days since I left your side
And the sun still has the nerve to rise
I wish the darkness never had to hide
I wish there was desolation in the skies

It's been days since I felt your salty kiss
And I fear touching my tortured skin
I wish your caress wasn't something I miss
I wish I wasn't destined to remember our sins

It's been days since I severed the ties
And blood pumps through veins frosted over
Now, the time has come to abandon the lies
So don't hesitate to find a new lover

It's been days since your heart embraced mine
And my own soul has become a stranger
Now, it is my heart on which you will dine
So take a handful to devour at your leisure

Reviews

[PoeT4994]

Once more, nice choice of words...and, i'm guessin this is about Alfonzo(I call him Alfonzo)...sad:-(I mean, I don't like rhyming stanza'd poetry, but...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................overall I liked it.

[Coyote Poetry]

This poem is amazing. Led us with a sad beginning and a warm and sweet offering at the end. Your words roll perfect. Description and the story was excellent.
Coyote

[Diego]

I think you captured the feelings of a breakup very well. The imagery especially added to it's impact. Great poem.

[Nicole]

Wow, this was amazing.
I really enjoyed the emotion in this poem.
And you even capitalized. xD
But..wow.
I have a story to tell you on Monday... O.o