"The Eyes of the Wind"

"Its help you can't see that makes a better you"

Its a presence you can feel

Yet, it can be startling at times

It beckons your soul to heal

While showing you a myriad of signs

As you decipher what they mean

you overlooked their placement

Even though the answers can't be seen

They keep your mind in amazement

Maybe the wind sees more than what we are

and all the things we can be

as we evolve from our scars

Remember your mind is your life's key 

Reviews

[R.E. Ray]

Your last line is so true and instructive, Corey. The entire poem is good. Still, the last line truly resonates. We're often our own best allies and our own worst enemies, all within the mind, construction and destruction often at the same time. And, perhaps nature sees more than we imagine. Nice work, sir.

[Final-Karma]

Just as the wind flows, our minds flow into all sorts of directions. Millions of neurons firing off to produce work just as the one I just read. It truly is the life's key. It has all the answers before you can produce the question. I really enjoyed this piece as it was highly thought provoking. Thank you for sharing your mind!

[Lydia Shutter]

Wise life advice in this one. I enjoyed the rhyming. It is true....our minds can take us anywhere. Lydi**

[Govind singh]

Wonderful poem...great work of words and rhythm..best wishes

[AYVID N]

Like children, we are, led by a greater power, shown only what we need to see, revealed only what we need to know, as we ascend the ladder of spiritual growth and learning. This poem had a very soothing and reassuring effect on me.

[lightsong]

great, great and again GREAT piece! after reading Your reviews to me, I'm not surprised to find such profound poem written by You, amazing amazing thoughts, awareness and growth of one's emotions, spirit and mind, some of Your line hit me, because it's the same way I see it too, the journey of a being's development, the signs that are cast on the road and how many might ignore them... the things we might not understand, but just feel them, knowing it's all a part of the progress, and oh You've nailed it at last! "Your mind is your life's key"!! I can't agree more!