" The Will of Diamond"

"The depths dilemmas unlock your inner strength"

When a tough task appears

you feel the urge to submit

at times you want to shed tears

but you must showcase true grit

As the pressure of life builds

don't forget what really matters

I'm here to keep your heart fulfilled

because I don't want to see it shatter

Like a diamond, you've become strong over time

Through adversity you shed your skin

and grew into something more divine

while your beauty flourished from within

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong, honest and wonderful words shared. I agree with your words and thoughts. Nothing worthwhile is easy. I liked the logic of the diamond. Take time to make perfect. Thank you for sharing the outstanding and hopeful poetry.
Coyote

[Alexa Apothic Red]

Diamonds are the hardest substance on earth.. resilient and beautiful at the same time. It is a truly special person who can be a diamond amid the adversities in life.

[Wyrn Tiger]

The point of will is that we all have a breaking point. I haven't found mine and i hope you haven't found yours. But its their and other people have to be mindful of that.

[Thepensiveplayer]

What you have said is true, but I believe people can go beyond their limits of what their will currently is. The breaking point is there for all of us, but its a crime to let life keep you down in my opinion. Perhaps because I'm an introvert at heart that I'm always willing to look within myself for more growth and understanding. Yet, a different perspective from a new friend couldn't hurt things either. Thanks for your comment :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Indeed, it is when we go through the tough times in life that we become stronger. We learn what is really important and what does not matter. Good rhyming in this one. Lydi**

[AYVID]

To be strong is to stand the test of time and pressure and heat. To be a diamond or plain mud. Sometimes our choice, sometimes not.

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Strong write with an equally strong message, well done!

[Thepensiveplayer]

Thank you very much and I look forward to reviewing your work as well

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

I look forward to the same, bro.