"I'll love you when your down"

"I'll love you when your down"

A Poem by Thepensiveplayer
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Showing sincerity for longevity

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Sweetheart, I know your full of fear
but I'll support your trials through the clear
I can't always give you what you want
but I'll keep you from looking gaunt

When I chose you as my mate
I wanted to intertwine our fates
I never cared what the future held
as long as, to each other, we never yelled

My passion for you is tried and true
I await our hands to touch when we say I do

© 2018 Thepensiveplayer


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Keep it real my brother! Love conquers all, though not like a tyrant. ):

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short but sweet you told a really nice story in as little words needed to make a great impact

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 8, 2018
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Thepensiveplayer
Thepensiveplayer

Harvey, LA



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My name is Corey Johnson and I enjoy writing poems to apply growth to myself. I've always wondered," what constitutes a good life in this world?" "Should a person conform to society's expectations or .. more..

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