"Hot love on a cold Night"

"Hot love on a cold Night"

A Poem by Thepensiveplayer
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Its sometimes better than a cup of hot chocolate

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"On Christmas eve we made plans"
"to see each other as quick as we can"
"We struggled to make time to meet"
"at a house full of comfortable heat"

"We had enough of family and wanted time for us"
"and embracing each other would be a great plus"
"I planned our getaway"
"to ensure we'd have an evening of play"

"If our whereabouts make our families wonder"
"then they'll see us in the morning after our sweet slumber"

© 2017 Thepensiveplayer


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OK...but hot chocolate Corey?? lol
what about trimming the words?
there's several extras to me.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thepensiveplayer

6 Years Ago

lol true:) I definitely was being extra and random on purpose. thanks for the review :)

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Thepensiveplayer
Thepensiveplayer

Harvey, LA



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My name is Corey Johnson and I enjoy writing poems to apply growth to myself. I've always wondered," what constitutes a good life in this world?" "Should a person conform to society's expectations or .. more..

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