"Do I choose her?"

"Do I choose her?"

A Poem by Thepensiveplayer
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I hope you all enjoy this short series. Tell me your theories

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"She's giving me the signs"
"that she wants to be mine"
"but I still find her curious"
"I wonder if she's just fun or quite serious"

"I made my moves"
"I quickly pulled her into my groove"
"but her eyes, like mine, were full of lust"
"it was something I couldn't come to trust"

"After we enjoyed what was on the menu"
"we left that nourishing venue"
"I went back to her house"
"and slowly took off her blouse"

"Before we could proceed, she had something to say"
"I could only wonder why she would stop our time to play"
"She told me she was married"
"and that she had a burden she carried"

"She said she wanted something new"
"and it was this moment that I knew"
"I had to make my departure"
"because we couldn't go any further"

© 2017 Thepensiveplayer


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Before we could proceed, she had something to say"
"I could only wonder why she would stop our time to play"
"She told me she was married"
"and that she had a burden she carried"

(This is the part that got me, wow!
Such vivid detail and imagery as well as the feelings in this) awesome write,

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Before we could proceed, she had something to say"
"I could only wonder why she would stop our time to play"
"She told me she was married"
"and that she had a burden she carried"

(This is the part that got me, wow!
Such vivid detail and imagery as well as the feelings in this) awesome write,

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

word choice is excellent. nicely done.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thepensiveplayer

6 Years Ago

Thanks a lot! I really appreciate your feedback. :)

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Thepensiveplayer

Harvey, LA



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My name is Corey Johnson and I enjoy writing poems to apply growth to myself. I've always wondered," what constitutes a good life in this world?" "Should a person conform to society's expectations or .. more..

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