"The Return of My Heart"

The light of my life has came back in full force

"Its been years since we parted"

"I can only remember when our love started"

"it felt like you left yesterday"

"Yet, I still have things I wanted to say"

"The distance was beyond our control"

"Unfortunately, our parents played a great role"

"I'd dream of when we were teens"

"and the hours I caressed you in those jeans"

"Then at sunset, I heard a knock on my door"

"I could only wonder what it was for?"

"it turned out you came back"

"and you kissed me after a lovely attack"

"In an instant, I carried you to my room"

"where my love for you could truly bloom"

"I looked into your eyes, and told you how I feel"

"and you said yes, with captivating appeal"

Reviews

[Glennise Ayuk]

ok. I like this one for just everything that it is..you reduced the years to an instant.

[Thepensiveplayer]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

[ElizaB]

Firstly, I really love the title!

Secondly, I really enjoyed your description and the suspense that you built.

And lastly I really liked rhyme scheme, its very neat and makes this piece in particular fluid from beginning to end.

Thank you! :)