last paryer

I live allow
In my soul happy I am here
The numbness and disperse
Now creping up slowly to me
Wanting for someone
To come rescue me
From hell
And nerve came to me
Now my body lay quit in the ground
By it self
My soul steel tortured
But no longer caring
In hell I stand a lone
And for ever standing a low
No longer
Feeling any thing in my soul
My body steel lifeless
Want for the one
How will bring me back
To the body I lost
O so long a go
Lost forever in the ground
It lies by its self
Sounded by wood and solo
Gust standing there
Gusts standing there all by my self
Standing there in hell no one by me
No longer caring were I am
Trying do die when
I am all ready dead to the world
Dead to my body and soul

Reviews

[Sabyth Fay]

Sad... really good job, I love it immensely. Keep up the awesome poems.

[Jonah Mallett]

Great Poem. I enjoyed it greatly.

[Lemontine]

i love this