Rosemary

Rosemary

A Poem by evilbro89
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We should all feel sorry for Rosemary she is really pretentious and emo EEERRRRR... insightful and sagacious.

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The tale of Rosemary is dark

Its horror chills the hearts of puppies

It makes men cry while they eat onions

 

Rosemary lives in a small town

There are only about 120,000 people

But she accepts this rural tranquility

 

She is abandoned and very lonely

Her friends and family all around her

Just can’t understand that

 

Her brother is evil

He only cares about making her suffer

She isn’t melodramatic at all

 

Her father tells her to lose weight

That means he hates her

Obesity is super healthy

 

She is wiser than everyone else

She has all the answers to life

Why consider other people’s views

 

Clearly the only hope she has to survive

Is to take herself more seriously.

 

 

© 2010 evilbro89


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I think you have some anger and resentment issues sarah. Nobody would have know this was poem was about you if you hadn’t told everyone. You write about not wanting to be judged and then you freak out when this person expresses an opinion. Great writing by the way evilbro!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Roses are red. Violets are blue. Clouds are white. Grass is green. Sarah Willingham is really mean.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think you have some anger and resentment issues sarah. Nobody would have know this was poem was about you if you hadn’t told everyone. You write about not wanting to be judged and then you freak out when this person expresses an opinion. Great writing by the way evilbro!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This Fine poem reminds of this girl i know on my block. i love how you show how conceded she is. i am thankful that my dark body has yet to meet a cold, sick person like her.

Posted 13 Years Ago


your such an a*s david!

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hard to find friends when you are different. I look at life. Can't change somebody. They must want change. I like the story and the ending. A very good tale. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago



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evilbro89
evilbro89

Falls Church, VA



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I am just a man who needs an outlet for the black lava that fills my mind. My poems are tragic yes, but they are all based on true events taken from my daily life. more..

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