Into A Dream

Into A Dream

A Poem by eversosweetly
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A simple comfort can warm your very soul. Sometimes the best things in life are microwavable. ;)

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When my heart and toes

are cold,
I make hot cocoa
with whipped cream.
A whirl of milky whiteness
      swirls
      and blends
in warm chocolate
like marble,
      [smoothly] melting
      all my fears
into a dream.


© 2010 eversosweetly


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Why do I always fall for these poems about delicious hot drinks? Amazing what a warm drink will do for us. Love your poem and the dream ending.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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perfection. I love it love it love it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Great little poem! Hot chocolate for me please!

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Love it! I really like your style; makes me want to pin some of these up on my wall to remind me to appreciate the little pleasures in life.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Ooh....oh..this is...stunning. It touches my heart...because that's what I often do for comfort...hot chocolate..:)

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Added on September 27, 2010
Last Updated on September 27, 2010
Tags: hot chocolate, hot cocoa, winter, cold, fear, dream

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eversosweetly
eversosweetly

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Hello there. I'm a bit new here. I've posted a few pieces I have made in the past to get started. I hope they inspire you. I have written poetry and essays before, but I have never seriously pursue.. more..

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