Its Raining Inside - I Miss You

    Its Raining Inside - I Miss You

Sometime, when the clouds rain,
I miss you with my eyes
Full of water, like clouds
Its heavy raining and dying inside

I wish to live in your shadow,
I wish to be called mad for you
Oh, beloved! Come and end all distances
And stop this raining residing inside

There is nobody other than you who is mine,
All my destinations are here with you alone
I wish you to share me with myself
I wish you here to stop this raining inside

I wish to feel the protection
Under your shadow
I want to feel the one 
Whose only mine and just for me

Oh, beloved..
Can you hear my voice directly?
Deadly feeling still residing 
Its heavy raining and dying inside ……


~AK~ 

© Eve Ola 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. I like the want and the need of the poem.
"I wish to feel the protection
Under your shadow
I want to feel the one
Whose only mine and just for me"
It is good to feel safe and sound in the shadow of love. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Penny]

Its funny but it reminds me of a romantic bollywood number but having said that those are very pretty pieces of verse and so is this one. The theme of longing is well expressed. Well done.

[Mari K]

This brought tears to my eyes. How beautiful!!

[Ashira Macy]

It is so hard to be away from the ones we love so dearly it truly feels as though we are dying inside. Wonderful work of poetic art dear!

[Susan Beth Horvath]

Should be "it's" in the title..but a very sweet poem

[Mayank]

Its very touching... the rains are very depressive and it goes hands in hands with our melancholic mind. I just want to suggest you, try to use other elements of rains like thunder and lighting that will outshine your poems ;) :)

[Avinash]

What a beautiful poetry of separation and undying love. You have evolved as poet in very less time my friend.

[Sami Khalil]

"I wish you to share me with myself
I wish you here to stop this raining inside

I wish to feel the protection
Under your shadow"

[Steve L.]

Heart-felt and touching. I can really feel your pain.

[stars are far]

oh that is so sad, i hope everything great, im sorry if that is about your suffering :(.
but you portryed a very amzing image here ..well done