Love Note 5 - I Miss You

Love Note 5 - I Miss You

I don't have words to express
I am missing you badly
Feeling like someone,
Scratching my main part
I hold on hard to pass this time
But soon I saw you 
The harder I cry
Begging on my knees 
To get out of this pain
But temporarily I have to stay
And its not just hardest
But even the most toughest
This time realising me more
About the worth you have
In my life am living...
I love you !!


~AK~ 

© Eve Ola 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"In my life am living...
I love you !!"
Sad and powerful poetry for love. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Penny]

Very profound piece. One could just feel the helplessness oozing out from it. Somewhere, I can relate to it which maked it even better. Well done.

[Mayank]

short and sweet... good way to let out your feeling.

[Kurayami]

Short but to the point. I like it.

~Kurayami

[Brittany Zedalis]

╰☆╮This is so sad...but very well done.╰☆╮

[MsJewel]

It's difficult to be away from the one you love. Your poem is beautiful and heartfelt.

:) Julie

[Ashira Macy]

Sadness. =( It is so hard to be without the ones we love for long periods of time, especially when we are so accustomed to seeing them around all the time.

[Matching Socks]

Heart breaking and sad, your every word breathes longing, beautifully expressed.

[stars are far]

omg thats very sad, i know how you feel ,escpecially because i have passed of what you are going through, and well i remember that after 29 days from the breakup i met him and cried on his shoulder asking why did he do this to me and whatever... but then nothin have changed.. yes
that was so good work and i assure you that you will be fine soon, just keep writing whatever you want to tell him,, and you will be fine.. good work

[Steve L.]

Well, that is heart-wrenching! Ugh. Well done, though.