Me, the Night & the Sleeping Soul

Me, the Night & the Sleeping Soul

Its a time when you are sleeping

While I am there keep talking..

You are lost in your dreamy world

Do you know what I am talking about?

You see, I always praise you and your love 

But at night, the praising is between..

Me, the night and the sleeping soul

For me this combination is enough..

The praising this time is even more pure

I love you a lot and only HE knows for sure..

Keeping my eyes on your closed eyes

Pulling your hairs soft like baby

You are my child, to whom I give all my smile

You are my man, to whom I share all

Daytime routine and hidden thoughts

Funny happenings and sad thoughts

My all smiles and all woes

For all that you are always there..

You are perfectly created for me because

Only you can handle me amazingly

You are my companion you are my bestie

You are everything to me and 

I do, because I always want

You Me and our pleasing company..

I don't want to end this moment but

When I am done with my talks,

I can't realize when I lost in dreams too

And you know what? 

Whenever I opened my eyes midnight

The only thing on my lips,

I love you and I will always do

May Allah protect this relation

Ameen!!

~AK~

© Eve Ola

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and powerful words my friend.
"I love you and I will always do
May Allah protect this relation"
I like the internal thoughts and perfect ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Penny]

Ameen! Insha allah this relationship will grow by time and never end. The characters in this poem remind me of Dickinson's "Because I could not stop for Death" where the characters were the poet, death and immortality. Very personal and raw piece. Also, a novel way to potray love. Well done.

[Eve Ola]

Thanks for very deep review I really enjoyed :) thanks again

[Penny]

Deep verses like this deserve deep reviews. You're welcome.

[R.R.L.]

I'm not too sure if I am a huge fan of how it flows. I would suggest rewriting this because it has a lot of potential!

[Eve Ola]

sure Thanks :)

[Rene Salinas]

There is always beauty to be found in relationships. And when you are in-tune with someone it seems to deliver this sparkling melody unlike a quick fix or a good bottle of anything that would elevate you into a state. Relationships deliver a more steady and not so evenly distributed amount of will. As I read through I could sense that and also the obvious fact that you are greatful to your divinity for having giving you the opportunity. This is only my personal opinion based on the fact that i am a little obtuse and nerdy so take as you may. Amen as a translation into English will come close to "so be it" and I pray and prey in trying not to show any signs of any particular faith as it causes division.

The intention behind your words seems the right one though

Thankyou

[Eve Ola]

Thanks for the feedback Rene

[Lyn Anderson]

A nice write. A few minor grammar errors, assuming these are due to translation issues. If you like, I can correct.

[Eve Ola]

thank you so much :)

[Lyn Anderson]

That is what this site should be for, to help each other be better.

[Eve Ola]

you are right but not all are good. they just knew how to creat mess without highlighting things. I met few of them. and being new here that was my worse experience here . anyway thanks for being around :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Well, that is very classless. I only won't help someone if they refuse help.