Colors of Nature

Colors of Nature

Cold morning with foggy way
As moving in this blurry way
Calmness exists through my way
I stopped my journey for this play
Want to feel this foggy cold
With autumny effect sides behold
Crispy leaves laying down
Roasted leaves falling down
Surrounded by flowery valley
Colorful petals with amazing gallery
Moving my nose close to layers
Smelling them like nature players
Looking around with profound
With stealing thought seeing around
I want to pluck this Red Rose, because
I always dreams in my thoughts
Passing time with flowery surrounding
Falling droplets at this grounding
I screamed, Its Rain Rain
Lifting my face up and refrained
Rain dip dips on my face
Wetty feet and grassy place
With red rose in my hands
I want to pause with longer stand
Bare foots on grassy land
Dipping soaking as I be
Quickly moving under the tree
Pulling bushes for more rainy gee
Oh Dear moment!
I always want you through my way
Will you stay long, for this day?

~AK~

© Eve Ola

Reviews

[Aprille]

The imagery and the structure are both great. I love poems showing the beauty of nature, using it as metaphors connecting to people's lives, I'm feeling happiness deep inside of me.

[Eve Ola]

Thanks for the feedback olive :)

[Susan Beth Horvath]

A truly heartfelt write. This is deeply touching with meaning, and emotion.

[Eve Ola]

Thank you Susan I do appreciate your words:)

[kublakhan27]

Delightful wordplay...I love your imagery and writing style...this is actually my favourite kind of day, kind of warm but enough rain to cool you off...I find peace in those kinds of days, as I do in the scene you've painted, literally, with all of its flowers and colours...nicely done Eve :)

[Eve Ola]

aww thank you for this super kind feedback I really appreciate your words dear :)

[kublakhan27]

You're most welcome my friend :)

[anne]

So nice...the beauty of nature has given beauty to your poem...I love the colors brought out by the rain loving girl.... :)

[Eve Ola]

Thanks anne.. btw your words " Rain Loving Girl" might be the title for next poem about rain :D

[anne]

aww...so nice...you keep enhancing the beauty of rain in your poem.....it will surely do magic.. :))

[Eve Ola]

Thanks for the support dear :)

[anne]

Anytime :))

[Avinash]

I love your poems a lot when they talk about nature. This one came up quite beautiful.

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Avinash your kind feedback and words are always needed

[priya]

Another mystique poem...its always a pleasure to read your poems... :) :D

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Priya its always been so supporting from your side :)

[priya]

i always love your poems... :)

[priya]

i always love your poems... :)