Daddy's Rule for Mr.Right - I Miss You Pa

Daddy's Rule for Mr.Right - I Miss You Pa

Dad to Mr. Right

I am everywhere so think before you hurt
If you hurt her, I will hurt you
So be true and don't lie
If you lie, I will found and punish you then
Just kept in mind,
She is my princess, not your conquest
I don't mind for going to jail
So think before your act
Whatever you do to her, I will do to you

Alas!!
That was just a dream
And you are not with me in real
How can i resist this time without you?
Why you are not here in real?
Whatever you said in dream why not in real?
Don't you know how much i miss you..
I always wish to show you first, my Mr.Right
I always try to see you within him
But dad you are one that cant be replaced

I have no more words to say...
I don't know how to express
But my mind my eyes still in thoughts
I miss the strength that I had before
Because you were with me ..

I Miss You Dad :(

~AK~

© Eve Ola

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

I understand this so very well
even though my Daddy is still living
his soul seems so dead inside at times
because of where he is at.



This made me cry so very heart warming
my own father didn't even give me away when I married
was sad but still a happy day for me I just wish my dad was himself
and gave me away my Grandpa Joe Okayed it he was like a father to me
when my dad wasn't himself any more
I can't remember but he never got to see me get married
so much :(


This was so beautiful and Heart warming
My Mother is like this She would hurt anyone
that harmed me or any of her children
you never want to upset a Mommy they can be
just as protective and family is
they know I am safe so my man won't harm me
he loves me but I have family that will protect me
Old brother older sister Hoping my mother will be moving
closer.


Thank you for sharing this Heartwarming
piece.


blessings. Benita / Kindred poet

[Eve Ola]

Thank you sooo much Kindered for this lovely and kind review. thanks for sharing your story Ibdo appreciate and i hope things get better soon. your words and feedback always inspire me, so encouraging n so kind. Thanks a lot :)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're welcome. always a pleasure to read your work.
I am glad it Encourages you that makes me smile always happy to see
another smile and cheered from some Encouraging words :) well I just pray an hope God will get a hold of his heart
other then that I don't believe if he says he's stopped Drinking he has. blessings. Benita / Kindred poet

[Matching Socks]

very heartwarming and heartfelt write Eva.
: )

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Ance :)

[Matching Socks]

Anytime. :)