Daddy's Rule for Mr.Right - I Miss You Pa

Daddy's Rule for Mr.Right - I Miss You Pa

Dad to Mr. Right

I am everywhere so think before you hurt
If you hurt her, I will hurt you
So be true and don't lie
If you lie, I will found and punish you then
Just kept in mind,
She is my princess, not your conquest
I don't mind for going to jail
So think before your act
Whatever you do to her, I will do to you

Alas!!
That was just a dream
And you are not with me in real
How can i resist this time without you?
Why you are not here in real?
Whatever you said in dream why not in real?
Don't you know how much i miss you..
I always wish to show you first, my Mr.Right
I always try to see you within him
But dad you are one that cant be replaced

I have no more words to say...
I don't know how to express
But my mind my eyes still in thoughts
I miss the strength that I had before
Because you were with me ..

I Miss You Dad :(

~AK~

© Eve Ola

Reviews

[Penny]

Very personal piece, something not to be judged. Describes an emotion, being with a neglecting father, I have never experienced. Very imaginative.

[Aprille]

Sounds like my Dad as I am his only daughter.
I like this poem and thanks for sharing. :)

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Olive I am glad you enjoyed reading this :)

[Aprille]

You're welcome.

[stars are far]

OMG Im so sorry :'( you made me tear, like im sorry really i know how much dads care for their little daughters and shall i say the first stanza sums my dadys words, i loved this, it hits me inside like OMG.. im so sorry for the loss. honestly i wish Mr.right never hurt you and forever be with you :) and be an imitatiion for your dadys care..sorry :'(

[Eve Ola]

Thanks friend! your words are blessing for me in real. Thanks a lot ..

[Eve Ola]

loss that nvr be filled ;(

[stars are far]

sorry for that, really i am

[Vidya Bacchus]

Awww Eve I think all Dad's have that speech or some variation of it prepared for any suitor of his little girl.You penned this so honestly and paid a wonderful compliment to your Dad :)

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Vidya your review brings smile :) much appreciated dear

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Kurayami]

This is a very nice poem. I like how you even think to write a poem of dad's thoughts to the daughter's lover. Very well thought out.

~Kurayami

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Kurayami I always enjoy your feedback and much appreciated thanks :)

[gabrielle]

It reminded me so much of my own father... It's sort of unfair but sometimes in finding Mr. Right , we tend to look in them some of the qualities possessed by our father. Very touching Eve...

[Eve Ola]

I do appreciate your words Dear. Thanks :)

[priya]

A daughter's first love is her father...so beautifully you haved expressed the feelings of a daughter waiting to be loved by her father... :)

[Eve Ola]

Thanks for such kind review Priya :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Fathers love their daughters. I have three daughters. I still try to keep them safe. A beautiful and sad poem for your father. I know he would of loved the words. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Eve Ola]

thanks Coyote your words are so inspiring I do appreciate :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. I lost my father in 1996. I think of him daily.

[Eve Ola]

and i lost in 1998 .. we can never forget them ever. i still thought he is on his work and I am waiting for him

[anne]

so heartfelt .......dads are just out of this world.......they give us the most precious relation we can never define.....loved reading it.......

[Eve Ola]

True! Thanks for the feedback dear :)