Oh Lord! Need Your Help

Oh Lord! Need Your Help

Oh Allah!
Consider my pray for further push
Begging you here by my knee
It’s just so painful that couldn't heel
Oh Lord! I beg you
You are the only one to listen me all
But this time I want a serious relief
I can’t hold it any more
As this pain dying me more
Killing my wills inside more
Oh Lord! hear me please
I want you by all the time
Picked me up or took this away
I beg to no one, except You
You know all my thoughts deep buried inside me
Whatever I do, you know the need
But help me as you are the only one
The one with whom I express every signal thought
That even I hide, from myself
Oh Lord! My head is lying deep down
Just took off this hurt and set me free
As I am dying by this hard time !!


~AK~

© Eve Ola

Reviews

[Penny]

A plea, more than a poem. Its raw and emotional. Well done.

[Eve Ola]

Thank you :)

[Penny]

My pleasure..

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and powerful prayer. Thank you for sharing.
Coyote

[Eve Ola]

Thanks for your words I appreciate ur feedback !

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Poet.

[Aprille]

I didn't see this one coming, it is completely different from your other poems. Yet, I can feel emotions with the words, they are true and heartfelt. Around the world, there are conflicts between Muslims and Christians even here in my own country but the brighter side is when I see friendship and bond between them despite of the difference. We are all men after all, capable of loving each other. Nice poem. :)

[Eve Ola]

very true said we are united with this bond..Thanks for such positive feedback :)

[Aprille]

Thank you so much and I'm glad again to meet you knowing you're a Muslim. There are many Muslims in my country but I never knew one.

[stars are far]

I assume you are a Muslim ? because "allah" is what we call God, second, i liked this work, it is well done and well said, we all need Allah to be happy without him we are just bodies no souls, no existance.. well done .
ps: if you are not a Muslim then I dont intened to judge and you are welcomed whatever your religion is :)

[Eve Ola]

Yeah I am Muslim and I am proud of it. for me HE is everythings. What you said is absolutely true.Thanks a lot dear :)

[stars are far]

my pleasure dear, and you are welcome

[Wandering Minstrel]

nice intention luv, but you began with that "allah" line. now we know there is no such a thing as "allah"..that is from a silly religion and has no place with images of God

[Eve Ola]

How you say that there is no Allah ? When u dont know about this religion then its better not to talk about. this is not a place to figure out and talk rough about one's religion

[Wandering Minstrel]

It's not a religion silly, Islam is an evil cult.......

[Luissanto]

As I read your writing, I could feel the heartache and hopelessness. The distress
and anguish comes through with every line you have written. Your prayer, so earnest
and heartfelt penetrates the soul... Very beautiful and heart wrenching.

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Luissanto your positive feedback is much appreciated :)

[Kurayami]

I have not see the expression of your face when you written this poem but when I read it, I can feel that you have a genuine expression on your face when you were writing this poem. It is very genuine.

~Kurayami

[Eve Ola]

Thanks a lot Kurayami for feeling the depth of this write.Thanks !

[priya]

I totally agree with ance...this poem belongs to a different genre...but you have done justice with it... :)

[Eve Ola]

Thansk Priya I am glad you like this :)

[priya]

:)....

[Matching Socks]

Wow. So different from most of your poems.
Such a heartfelt prayer.
Well done my friend.

[Eve Ola]

Thanks for giving time to my writes and for such kind reviews