Splashy Raining & Dancing Girl

Its Raining here :D

Splashy Raining & Dancing Girl

Hey! come up here come up here
Its raining here raining here
Lift your faces up towards
Droplets moving just towards
With closed eyes feeling peace
The moment just I wanna freeze
Inhaling nature with my breath
Moving inward at its bests
Striking sounds to my ears
Its raining raining Oh my dears
Its falling down with the joy
Dipping soaking like a toy
Droplets here catching attention
Creating peace & kicking tension
Lifting toes with these dances
Moving around with the glances
As dancing girl with rainy drops
She is feeling on the tops
Wanna go on longer drive
Longer the road longer the ride
Sprinkling droplets on the screen
Splashy water here you been
Foggy window with my art
I love them all by my heart
Splashy puddles by other side
Making surrounding full of pride
Oh dear rain please stay for long
As your falling sound is soothing song


~AK~

© Eve Ola

Reviews

[Vidya Bacchus]

You have captured the feeling and joy of the playing in the rain .Really great poem Eve :)

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Vidya I do appreciate your words :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Kurayami]

This is a really good poem about the rain and the enjoyment of being in the rain. Not many people like rain but you definitely described it well and I felt thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem. Good job!

~Kurayami

[Eve Ola]

thanks Kurayami !! Your words and positive feedback much appreciated and required :)

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

So beautifully Penned and so peaceful.


Thank you for sharing this lovely piece
and thank you for your kind review and comments
you left on my page.


Creating peace & kicking tension
Lifting toes with these dances
Moving around with the glances
As dancing girl with rainy drops
She is feeling on the tops

Foggy window with my art
I love them all by my heart
Splashy puddles by other side
Making surrounding full of pride
Oh dear rain please stay for long
As your falling sound is soothing song

Beautiful Stanza's lines here my Favorites.



BTW I Love the Rain it is
very calming and peaceful.


Blessings. Benita/ Kindred poet

[Eve Ola]

Your feedback is simply Wow :) Thanks Kindered !!

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

it was a pleasure to read. you're very welcome my friend :) Blessings. Benita / Kindred poet
read moreit was a pleasure to read. you're very welcome my friend :) Blessings. Benita / Kindred poet

[Chris Micha]

Just plain beautiful, Eva. I really really liked this piece. Bravo!

[Eve Ola]

Thanks a lot Christian :)

[stars are far]

aw thats very niceeeee,,i love it and i love the pic hehe its sweet, i loved it

[Eve Ola]

Thank you dear I am glad you enjoyed the read :)

[KWP]

Fabulous depiction of the rain... When you dance and sing and laugh in the rain is when you feel the most alive. I really enjoyed your write here you seem to have covered every rain aspect .. When I read it I feel quite full of life ... Well done x x x

[Eve Ola]

Thank you so much your words are blessing for me always n i really appreciate :) stay around

[anne]

While dealing with fiction you are at your level best........I loved reading it......awesome work....

[Eve Ola]

Sweet .. Thank you so much :)

[Penny]

And the girl talked about in the poem is you. :-). Very nice and cheerful piece. You covered each and every aspect of monsoon in this poem. Awesome.

[Eve Ola]

Yes I am :D Thanks for leaving kind feedback :)

[Penny]

It is my pleasure completely.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

A beautiful song on rain I feel rain brings lots of happiness even I like rain! You wrote wonderful...

[Eve Ola]

Thank you so much n thanks for such feedback :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome friend!

[Matching Socks]

Ahh, I love the rain! It's so much fun. :)
Great little poem, you've really captured the fun and happy side of a little shower.
Nice one my friend.

[Eve Ola]

Thanks for the kind words I do appreciate :)